The intro/1st chapter of my novel (Rough!)

I reluctantly share...

Well, I feel prepared (sort of) to share a little bit of my novel-in-progress. It’s the intro and the 1st chapter. I already feel like I need to dig deeper into the main character. He’s not as neurotic and OCD as I think he should be. I’m going to need to spend some time inserting more of that in the character’s thoughts.

But anyway, here it is. I’d lov…